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通过写出如下英语逻辑作文,来说明何谓“逻辑一条线”写英语作文。就是向读者表明:英语写作者依据逻辑思维规律,在阐述已知写作提示内容中,挖掘出提示句所产生的内在和外在原因及其结果,作出合理判断、推理,以认识客观情况的个性心理品质和本真思考规律,借助“以提示点为中心,左找原因,右找结果”之原理,写出具有独立创造思维价值的英语得高分的作文如下。
Dear my friends,
Good afternoon!
I, LiJin, feel honored to deliver a speech here today on winning most of your votes in favor of my holding vice-president position in English Club, where you will grow to be an excellent English-learner. This you will find pleasant to improve in practice, in the belief that I will be extremely well qualified for the position up to my own quality together with my up-to-date ideas as follows.
In high team spirits, I consider it easy to establish a good working relation with you all as good friends. I’m good at speaking, listening to, or writing, and I will help you with your English.
To be able to communicate in English with each other, in my opinion, you all my fellows in the Club will be invited not only to attend a series of lectures once a month where you would have acquired considerable knowledge, but to have English evening party once a week to get much enjoyment in making you understand in English, of course, not to mention English Corner.
Based on the above told, so achievable would remain your English that you will be kept to improve in English in such a way as this: only by learning each other’s strong points in putting English into practice, will you be able to get ready for the speech competition taking place between you and students from other universities.
To take up challenges, naturally speaking, you as well as fore-said winners if interested in being selected as candidates for top-6 by competition in the university are expected to come to be excellent debaters with students from other universities. This will keep you wise in asking their questions continuously and set you broad-minded quickly in reply to all questions which are done by counter-party. Admittedly, to your improvement in English, your kindly valuable comments together with suggestions would be welcome to make on the above-planned life in the Club, to my delight.
I wish my dream could come true about vice-president in the English Club since I will back in favor with you, who would have developed proficiency in English in the Club, I’m sure.
Thank you.
(LiJin speech given on winning votes hopefully)
以上英语逻辑写作的已知条件是:某大学李津同学,参加英语俱乐部竞选新一届副主席的相关活动,请按以下4项提示,写一篇竞选演讲稿:A. 个人的优势介绍(如性格、特长等);B. 组织校内的活动的设想(如举办讲座、英语晚会等);C. 组织校际交流活动的设想(如举办辩论赛、演讲比赛等);D. 表达竞选的愿望。
同样还是这个已知写作条件,使用模板英语写作得低分作文如下(已标1-13顺序号为便利说明),因为没有遵守“以提示点为中心,左找原因,右找结果”之规则:
Good afternoon, my dear friends.
My name is Li jin. 1 Today I am very glad to have the chance to run for the vice president of the English Club. 2 Concerning the position of vice president of the English Club, I feel qualified to take the job. 3 First, I have gained a lot of experience and received wide praise from my classmates for my job as monitor. 4 Second, I am a warm-hearted boy and always ready to help others. 5 Third, I am good at organizing activities and have held a number of English corners and discussions.
6 Looking into the future, I will try my best to assist the president and serve my fellow students if I am lucky enough to be the vice president. 7 My plan is as follows: on the one hand, I will organize some campus activities, like "English Evening", a platform where students can show their English. 8 In this process, we can still learn from each other. 9 And I will invite some famous professors to give lectures for our students so that we can acquire a lot of knowledge. 10 On the other hand, I will organize more activities to enhance the inter-school communication. 11 We can compete with students from other universities in debate contests or speech contests. 12 Moreover, I will open more channels for you to voice your opinions and need.
13 I sincerely hope you will give me a chance, and please believe me that I will be a good vice president.
Thank you.
与英语逻辑思维写作比较,这个英语模板写作,有13方面需要改进如下:
1竞选原因漏写了“为了向学生提供优质英语服务”和结果漏写“学生参与有魅力的英语活动”;
2原因漏写“你们可能由此认为英语操练会有进步” 和结果漏写“而期望我是合格人选;
3原因句位置及语法有误,应是“in praise of my classmates”结果漏写“you will share with me a lot of experience I have gained when in position monitor”;
4结果漏写“So it’s easy, I’m sure, for you to develop friendly relations with me on English” ;
5结果漏写“to make it successful for my fellows to communicate each other in English”;
6与“组织校内的活动的设想”关系不大,审题有误,应删除;
7原因漏写“为提高英语水平”;
8是7结果句,因此7、8句可以合并;
9原因漏写“让学生开阔英语眼界”;
10原因漏写“让学生理论联系实际”;
11原因漏写“为应对挑战” 和结果漏写“锻炼语言使用能力”;
12不明确:“发表意见的途径” 即:为什么开一个发表意见的途径?发表什么意见;
13不明确:“给我一个机会” 即:什么机会?为什么相信我是一名杰出的副主席?(因为你们将可以从英语俱乐部在听、说、写英语上受益匪浅)。
从上述英语作文可以看出:
以上1-13点加上原因和结果,即括号内容“以提示点为中心,左找原因,右找结果”规定的或原因或结果句内容,就是英语逻辑思维写英语文了,如开头写的英语作文。
总结:
英语逻辑写作特点是“逻辑一条线”即内容让读者读起来没有“断层”有可信度之感觉,所以操作程序是:通过不同原因相应推出不同结果,作出清晰的判断推理,达到全面分析和解决问题的目的,因此因果是相互衔接的,这与英美人在用英语表达思想中从头到尾都渗透着逻辑,是相吻合的。
非英语为母语的各国家人们在写英语中注意到使用这种因果关联思维方式,不过有时把非英语为母语思维方式带入英语写作中,也是不可避免的。所以倡导逻辑写作英语表达应努力遵循英语逻辑思维规则写作英语。如此英语逻辑写作一不留神得高分儿?
英语模板写作特点是“不是逻辑一条线”即不通过原因相应推出结果,因此没有作出清晰的判断推理,没有达到全面分析和解决问题的目的,因为因果是相互不衔接的,违反“英语是逻辑语言,逻辑是英语的灵魂”之原理。其理由是英语模板写作思路方法采用中文的“形散神不散而跳跃式思维”。如按照1-13点说明的思维写英语就符合英语步步判断和推理,英语写作内容就“逻辑一条线了”。
到此为止,你就完全可以理解并解决了——英语作文:“逻辑一条线”让你一次性学会英语思维写英语得高分——之问题了。
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